Survivor Season 34: Game Changers

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"The Great Wall of China is one of the most iconic and well-known landmarks in the world. It is a series of fortifications made of stone, brick, tamped earth, wood, and other materials, built along the northern borders of China to protect the Chinese states and empires against the raids and invasions of the various nomadic groups of the Eurasian Steppe. The Great Wall stretches from Dandong in the east, to Lop Lake in the west, along an arc that roughly delineates the southern edge of Inner Mongolia. The wall consists of many disjointed walls, which were often built to keep out different invaders, and were later connected by the first emperor of China, Qin Shi Huang, to protect against invasions from the Xiongnu people in the north. Today, the Great Wall of China has become a popular tourist attraction and a symbol of China's rich history and culture."

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The Great Wall of China, which stretches from Dandong in the east to Lop Lake in the west, is one of the world's most iconic and well-known landmarks. It is a series of fortifications built of stone, brick, tamped earth, wood, and other materials along the northern borders of China. These fortifications were constructed to protect the Chinese states and empires from the raids and invasions of the various nomadic groups of the Eurasian Steppe. The wall consists of many disjointed walls, originally built to keep out different invaders. They were later connected by the first emperor of China, Qin Shi Huang, to protect against invasions from the Xiongnu people in the north. The Great Wall roughly delineates the southern edge of Inner Mongolia.

Today, the Great Wall of China has become not only a popular tourist attraction but also a symbol of China's rich history and culture.

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